After her initial draft, Takayama submitted a revised version on October 14th, 1974.

A revised second draft was made by three lawyers, A. Beham, A. Hintzheimer and Z. E.

The 177th General Assembly in 1965 considered and amended the draft confession and sent a revised version for general discussion within the church.

The 178th General Assembly in 1966 accepted a revised draft and sent it to presbyteries throughout the church for final ratification.

According to the revised Terms and Definitions of IS 8879 ( from the public draft ):

In that draft, she had two brothers, Biggs and Windy, whose identities were substantially revised into their current form by the fourth draft ( though they did not appear in intervening versions ).

In a revised draft dated two months later, Indiana finds his father in Krak des Chevaliers, the Nazi leader is a woman named Greta von Grimm, and Indiana battles a demon at the Grail site, which he defeats with a dagger inscribed with " God is King ".

Melville Herskovits prepared a draft " Statement on Human Rights " which Executive Board of the American Anthropological Association revised, submitted to the Commission on Human Rights, and then published.

The title of the collection, ( silvae meaning " forest " or " raw material ") was used to describe the draft of a poets work which was composed impromptu in a moment of strong inspiration and which was then revised into a polished, metrical poem.

The writer used the revised outline to write the first draft of the script while the other writers worked on developing the next.

" After the stormy first meeting, a group including Meyer, Roddenberry, and producer Ralph Winter discussed the revised draft.

** 1971 – to draft a revised constitution to replace the old U. S. customed 1935 Philippine constitution.

Kenyatta read the draft of the Kenya section of Padmore's new book, How Britain Rules Africa ( 1936 ) With the editorial help of an English editor named Dinah Stock who became a close friend, Kenyatta published his own book, Facing Mount Kenya ( his revised LSE thesis ) in 1938 under his new name, Jomo Kenyatta.

In September 2003 a revised set of draft rules and regulations was issued by the ECEU for submissions by the end of October.

Henson continued to pursue Bowie for the role of Jareth, and sent him each revised draft of the film's script for his comments.

It was approved by Curzon on 31 March 1921, and the revised final draft of the mandate ( including Transjordan ) was forwarded to the League of Nations on 22 July 1922.

Hahnemann published the 5th edition in 1833 ; a revised draft of this ( 1842 ) was discovered after Hahnemann's death and finally published as the 6th edition in 1921.

" On December 26, Preminger submitted a revised draft of the script which, due to numerous lines of dialogue exhibiting " an unacceptably light attitude towards seduction, illicit sex, chastity, and virginity ," was rejected on January 2, 1952.

Perhaps the most famous line in Adams's draft declaration of rights was this: " All men are born equally free and independent ...." This was slightly revised before being adopted by the constitutional convention: " All men are born free and equal ...."

When New Line realized that they had sent Fincher the wrong draft, the President of Production, Michael De Luca, met with Fincher and noted that there was internal pressure to retain the revised version ; De Luca stated that if Fincher promised to produce the movie, they would be able to stay with the head-in-a-box ending.

In 1994, Parks Canada established revised " Guiding Principles and Operating Policies ", which included a mandate for the Banff-Bow Valley Study to draft management recommendations.

* The revised draft is next submitted for additional analysis and consideration to the ALI Council, a body of some 70 prominent judges, practicing lawyers, and law teachers.

Nothing more was heard of the revised plan, and the November 2010 draft Local Transport Plan reverted to a Wolverhampton loop costing £ 31 million.

And though in his later years he revised his poems many times, the revisions did not alter the essential nature of the style which he had established before he was thirty ; ;

The revised procedure was acclaimed as a long-overdue reform.

In 1960, Nicholas Poppe presented what was in effect a heavily revised version of Ramstedt ’ s volume on phonology that has since set the standard in Altaic studies.

A second German edition was published in 1913, containing theologically significant revisions and expansions: but this revised edition did not appear in English until 2001.

Transmission, Gregory Chaitin also presents this theorem in J. ACM – Chaitin's paper was submitted October 1966 and revised in December 1968, and cites both Solomonoff's and Kolmogorov's papers.

It is most usual to date Athenian democracy from Cleisthenes, since Solon's constitution fell and was replaced by the tyranny of Peisistratus, whereas Ephialtes revised Cleisthenes ' constitution relatively peacefully.

Among the most successful of his 37 operas staged during his lifetime were Armida ( 1771 ), La fiera di Venezia ( 1772 ), La scuola de ' gelosi ( 1778 ), Der Rauchfangkehrer ( 1781 ), Les Danaïdes ( 1784 ), which was first presented as a work of Gluck's, La grotta di Trofonio ( 1785 ), Tarare ( 1787 ) ( Tarare was reworked and revised several times as was Les Danaïdes ), Axur, re d ' Ormus ( 1788 ), La cifra ( 1789 ), Palmira, regina di Persia ( 1795 ), Il mondo alla rovescia ( 1795 ), Falstaff ( 1799 ), and Cesare in Farmacusa ( 1800 ).

The libretto was mainly written in early 1927 and the music was finished in the spring of 1929, although both text and music were partly revised by the authors later.

This approach was continued by Russell and Whitehead in their influential Principia Mathematica, first published 1910-1913, and with a revised second edition in 1927.

( A revised 2-port model was released in 1983, along with a game adapter that allowed gamers to play all 2600 games.

Frank Moore Cross later proposed that an early version of the history was composed in Jerusalem in Josiah's time ( late 7th century ); this first version, Dtr1, was then revised and expanded to create a second edition, that identified by Noth, and which Cross labelled Dtr2.

Still later, after Jerusalem did fall to the Babylonians, the book was revised and expanded further to reflect the circumstances of the late exilic and post-exilic community.

The Viola Concerto was revised and polished in the 1990s by Bartók's son, Peter ; this version may be closer to what Bartók intended ( Chalmers 1995, 210 ).

Soon after, the band's name was revised to Bill Haley & His Comets.

The music was revised completely but the biggest change came in the footage used – reflecting the methods and nature of newsgathering, while a strong emphasis was placed on the BBC logo itself.

The Pian Breviary was again altered by Sixtus V in 1588, who introduced the revised Vulgate, in 1602 by Clement VIII ( through Baronius and Bellarmine ), especially as concerns the rubrics ; and by Urban VIII ( 1623 – 1644 ), a purist who altered the text of certain hymns.

In Scotland the only one which has survived the convulsions of the 16th century is Aberdeen Breviary, a Scottish form of the Sarum Office ( the Sarum Rite was much favoured in Scotland as a kind of protest against the jurisdiction claimed by the diocese of York ), revised by William Elphinstone ( bishop 1483 – 1514 ), and printed at Edinburgh by Walter Chapman and Andrew Myllar in 1509 – 1510.

Baronius Press's revised edition of the Liturgical Press edition ( which was originally scheduled for publication at the end of 2006 ) was delayed due to numerous factors.