An early theory, suggested by Swiss theologian Jean LeClerc in the 17th century, posits that the longer Western version was a first draft, while the Alexandrian version represents a more polished revision by the same author.

Inspired by the Enlightenment, the original version of the Declaration was discussed by the representatives on the basis of a 24 article draft proposed by the sixth bureau ,< ref > The original draft is an annex to the report of the August 12th report ( Archives parlementaires, 1, sup > e </ sup > série, tome VIII, débats du 12 août 1789, p. 431 ).</ ref >< ref > Archives parlementaires, 1 < sup > e </ sup > série, tome VIII, débats du 19 août 1789, p. 459 .</ ref > led by Jérôme Champion de Cicé.

After her initial draft, Takayama submitted a revised version on October 14th, 1974.

; November 1992: HTML DTD 1. 1 ( the first with a version number, based on RCS revisions, which start with 1. 1 rather than 1. 0 ), an informal draft

The 177th General Assembly in 1965 considered and amended the draft confession and sent a revised version for general discussion within the church.

Walter Bernstein, a blacklisted scriptwriter, was commissioned by Morheim to produce the first draft " faithfully " adapted from the original script written by Shinobu Hashimoto, Hideo Oguni and Akira Kurosawa ; when Mirisch and Brynner took over the production, they brought on Walter Newman, whose version " is largely what's on screen.

Adams persuaded the committee to select Thomas Jefferson to compose the original draft of the document, which congress would edit to produce the final version.

Although Jefferson wrote that Congress had " mangled " his draft version, the Declaration that was finally produced, according to his biographer John Ferling, was " the majestic document that inspired both contemporaries and posterity.

The draft working version of ZIPI was primarily aimed at addressing many limitations of MIDI ( Musical Instrument Digital Interface ).

In Heine's version, this is presented as a means for ironic humour ; however, Wagner took this theme literally and in his draft, the woman is faithful until death.

Note that the latest version of the syslog protocol draft under development within the IETF includes a mapping between these two different sets of severities.

An amended version of the draft document was subsequently approved by the Dáil.

Little background on the history of the region, the First World War, and the Arab Revolt is provided, probably due to Bolt's increased focus on Lawrence ( while Wilson's draft script had a broader, more politicized version of events ).

In the draft version of the Constitution, there was no Vice President, and the President of the Senate was to be the immediate successor to the President.

* Mendeleev's first draft version of the Periodic Table, 17 February 1869. chemheritage. org

This is significant because some critics argue that in an original version of the play, now lost, Hortensio was not a suitor to Bianca, but simply an old friend of Petruchio ( this is a modification of the Ur-Shrew theory, which instead of arguing that a play by someone other than Shakespeare served as a source, argues that an earlier draft by Shakespeare once existed ).

Revisiting his notes in 1987 to draft a detailed reply to the abbreviated public version of Cahill's report, Walter McCrone chose the wrong sample to illustrate a " typical " black ink particle, selecting one which had been found only loosely attached to the ink.

He subsequently took offense at inaccurate comments made by the producer of the film version of his V for Vendetta, which stated that the author — who had distanced himself completely from film adaptations of his work, particularly after LXG — had commented favourably on a draft of the script.

In February 2009, at the Annual Meeting of the American Association for the Advancement of Science ( AAAS ), it was announced that the Max Planck Institute for Evolutionary Anthropology had completed the first draft version of the Neanderthal genome.

Giordano said he worked on the story's plot with Miller, he commented, " The version that was finally done was about his fourth or fifth draft.

" After Bridwell returned it with extensive editorial changes Beck attempted to draw the rewritten version but became so dissatisfied with it that he tore up the artwork he had drawn thus far and returned the Bridwell draft to DC.

Aaron Spelling wrote an early draft of the screenplay, but the final version was mostly written by Jon Cleary.

" Its trademark overture, which Newmarch says " lifts us off our feet with its madcap vivacity ", was composed in a piano version before Smetana received the draft libretto.

A draft of any National Assembly bill of tribal concern must be referred to the House of Chiefs for advisory opinion.

A draft bill was proposed in April 2006.

The Senate accepted Monroe's request and asked Calhoun to draft a bill, which was killed in the House of Representatives by the Georgia delegation.

A draft bill was published on 12 June 2006.

The draft bill, which would increase the executive powers of the monarch, went before Parliament for a first reading in November.

On October 10, 1927, Army Chief of Staff General Charles Pelot Summerall directed that a draft bill be sent to Congress " to revive the Badge of Military Merit ".

This was followed by another review by Defoe on 6 December, in which he even went so far as to provide a draft text for the bill.

A major bill such as the Securities Law can take years to draft, and a bill sometimes will not be put before a final vote if there is significant opposition to the measure.

With respect to proposals by the State Council of the People's Republic of China, the NPC has rejected a bill on maritime safety, and it is no longer uncommon for the State Council to amend or withdraw a bill on account of NPC opposition as with the case of the fuel tax and the draft food safety law which have been repeatedly blocked by the NPC.

A major bill often takes years to draft, and a bill sometimes will not be put before a final vote if there is significant opposition to the measure.

Johnson went too far when he proposed a bill that would crack down on the draft exemptions of shipyard workers if they were absent from work too often.

Ironically, Macon did not vote in favor of the finished draft of the bill.

The SEZ Act, 2005, was an important bill to be passed by the Government of India in order to instill confidence in investors and signal the Government's commitment to a stable SEZ policy regime and with a view to impart stability to the SEZ regime thereby generating greater economic activity and employment through their establishment, a comprehensive draft SEZ Bill prepared after extensive discussions with the stakeholders.

The bill has gone through extensive community meetings and subsequently the bill has changed and controversial areas, such as north Prince of Wales, have been removed from the draft bill.

The draft bill privatizes significant acreage of National Forest Land by conveying it into the exclusive ownership of SEALASKA, a native Alaskan corporation.

A draft Act of Parliament is known as a bill.

A draft piece of legislation is called a bill, when this is passed by Parliament it becomes an Act and part of statute law.

His attempt to draft the federal resolutions was delayed by a period as acting premier, when he had to deal with the 1892 Broken Hill miners ' strike, and his carriage of a complex electoral reform bill.

A far-reaching and heavily criticised draft, this was eventually replaced by an even more thorough-going bill.

In the end, the draft bill was never submitted to the Oireachtas for approval.