Andy rolled up the revised script he had been studying.

At the publisher's invitation he revised the storyline and the improvements impressed the editor sufficiently to invite Barks to try his hand at contributing both the script and the artwork of his follow-up story.

The finished version of the film was significantly different from the original screenplay drafts as Bruce Lee revised much of the script himself, including having written and directed the film's opening Shaolin Monastery fight sequence.

On Jarmusch's return with the revised script, Ray reacted favourably to his student's dissent, citing approvingly the young student's obstinate independence.

The second script that Tarantino sold was Natural Born Killers, which was revised by Dave Veloz, Richard Rutowski and director Oliver Stone.

A revised version of the script from March 1994 included feedback from the producers, studio, actors and director ; the writers changed a sequence where Harriman trained his predecessors in the Enterprise-B's operation after Shatner felt the scene's joke went too far.

Ball and Mendes revised the script twice before it was sent to the actors, and twice more before the first read-through.

By April 1981, a revised script was completed that moved the character's death to the movie's final act.

According to Vito Russo in the book The Celluloid Closet ( 1981, revised 1987 ), the script originally had Grant's character say " I ...

" A later, revised, script was approved.

The writer used the revised outline to write the first draft of the script while the other writers worked on developing the next.

This was changed for the film version and was subsequently updated for the stage version when Richard O ' Brien revised the script for the 1990 West End revival.

Richard O ’ Brien's revision of the script in 1990 featured a hybrid of the two songs under the title " I Can Make You a Man ", in the 1999 revised script this song was replaced by the film version which continues to be used in all major productions.

Second, references to " self-control " in the revised script were left out of a filmed discussion of homosexuality, leaving the discussion " without sufficient counterbalance ".

) Kaye ( best known in much of the U. S. as the voice of NFL Films ) did another equally well-received remake of " War of the Worlds " in 1971 using a revised script and some new cast members from among the staffers on hand at the time, including Jackson Armstrong and newsmen Jim McLaughlin and Joe Downey.

Henson continued to pursue Bowie for the role of Jareth, and sent him each revised draft of the film's script for his comments.

She did not give him many notes ; she would tick all of the places where she laughed, and then he revised the script accordingly.

They use the Xibe script, a slightly revised Manchu script.

I am afraid we can give no assurance that we should be able to pass a film based on the present script and a revised script should be sent us for our comments, in which the overall unpleasantness should be mitigated.

Hollywood's Production Code Administration initially objected to elements of Fletcher's screenplay, including its depiction of drug trafficking, and the script was significantly revised to win approval.

" On December 26, Preminger submitted a revised draft of the script which, due to numerous lines of dialogue exhibiting " an unacceptably light attitude towards seduction, illicit sex, chastity, and virginity ," was rejected on January 2, 1952.

Jones had made an earlier notable attempt at a pronunciation dictionary but it was now that he produced the first edition of his famous English Pronouncing Dictionary, a work which in revised form is still in print.

This scheme was later revised, so that search results now are delivered over User Datagram Protocol ( UDP ) directly to the node that initiated the search, usually an ultrapeer of the node.

The Binet has also been revised several times and is now similar to the Wechsler in several aspects, but the Wechsler continues to be the most popular test in the United States.

Interpretations of Magna Carta and the role of the rebel barons in 1215 have been significantly revised: although the charter's symbolic, constitutional value for later generations is unquestionable, in the context of John's reign most historians now consider it a failed peace agreement between " partisan " factions.

The play's brevity and certain aspects of its staging ( for instance, the large proportion of night-time scenes and the unusually large number of off-stage sounds ) have been taken as suggesting that the text now extant was revised for production indoors, perhaps at the Blackfriars Theatre, which the King's Men acquired in 1608.

They reportedly have revised the Roman Missal and the Roman Calendar, and now neither of those documents mention Mary Magdalene as a repentant sinner of ill repute.

The original music and 1908 lyrics of the song are now in the public domain in the United States ( worldwide copyright remains until 70 years after the composers ' deaths ), but the copyright to the revised 1927 lyrics remains in effect.

* Computer Lib: You can and must understand computers now / Dream Machines: New freedoms through computer screens — a minority report ( 1974 ), Microsoft Press, revised edition 1987: ISBN 0-914845-49-7

Though Fox's work has now been to some extent revised, it remains a vital record of stretches of the Dyke that still existed between 1926 and 1928, when his three field surveys took place, but that are now destroyed.

Unconventional fiber size was not an issue, as they were developed by fiber manufacturers, but some test equipment has difficulty complying with revised qualification standards, and now use " Step Index with Bends " mode scramblers, which can be adjusted to purpose.

In the new law, the age of 18 ( solar year ) would be for both genders considered and juvenile offenders will be sentenced on a separate law than of adults .” Based on the Islamic law which now seems to have been revised, girls at the age of 9 and boys at 15 of lunar year ( 11 days shorter than a solar year ) were fully responsible for their crimes.

The European Conference of Postal and Telecommunications Administrations ( CEPT ) originally standardized the E-carrier system, which revised and improved the earlier American T-carrier technology, and this has now been adopted by the International Telecommunication Union Telecommunication Standardization Sector ( ITU-T ).

Adaptations of the revised Roman Rite lectionary were adopted by Protestants, leading to the publication in 1994 of the Revised Common Lectionary for Sundays and major feasts, which is now used by many Protestant denominations, including also ( Methodists, Reformed, United, etc.

" In the revised treaty this now reads as, " In keeping with the abiding ties of close friendship and cooperation between Bhutan and India, the Government of the Kingdom of Bhutan and the Government of the Republic of India shall cooperate closely with each other on issues relating to their national interests.

The new play, now revised and updated, had its premiere in Chesterfield in January 2011 and then embarked on a UK tour.

At first, many non-communist countries condemned the speech as warmongering, though many historians have now revised their opinions.

But because of protests from city dwellers and revised policies of city planners, Gouda did not continue back-filling moats and city-canals, now considered historically valuable.

Permission was given for use, only in Mass celebrated with the people, of the vernacular language, especially in the Biblical readings and the reintroduced Prayers of the Faithful, but, " until the whole of the Ordinary of the Mass has been revised ," in the chants ( Kyrie, Gloria, Creed, Sanctus, Agnus Dei, and the entrance, offertory and communion antiphons ) and in the parts that involved dialogue with the people, and in the Our Father, which the people could now recite entirely together with the priest.

Sophie's Choice is a realistic novel largely narrated in the first person by an older Stingo, now a successful novelist, but also includes Sophie's ( frequently revised ) memories of her childhood, wartime Warsaw, and her imprisonment at Auschwitz – presented in both the first and third persons.

The Saint Valentine is now celebrated on February 14 remains in the Catholic Church's official list of saints ( the Roman Martyrology ), but, in view of the scarcity of information about him, his commemoration was removed from the General Calendar for universal liturgical veneration, when this was revised in 1969.

A selection of the Papers presented at the Colloquium appraising Griesbach's life, work and influence, aimed " to indicate why an understanding of this scholar's contribution to New Testament criticism is important both for the history of New Testament scholarship and for contemporary research ", together with the text in Latin and in English translation of The Dissertation of J. J. Griesbach, Doctor of Theology and Principal Professor in the University of Jena, in which he demonstrates that the entire Gospel of Mark has been extracted from the Gospels of Matthew and Luke, written in the name of the University of Jena ( 1789 – 1790 ), now revised and furnished with many additions, are to be found in Bernard Orchard and Thomas R. W. Longstaff ( ed.

Front and rear fascias were revised, and side air intakes were now asymmetrical with the left side feeding an oil cooler.

The revised C ration was now intended for feeding combat troops continuously up to three weeks ( 21 days ).